My writing has varied sentences that allow my essay to flow more smoothly. It also provides structure to improve my words. 

      Being able to choose the right sentences that help to make my essay flow smoothly has never been one of my strengths when writing. I feel that from the "Risky Business Essay" to the "Coming of Age Essay", my sentence variation improved a lot. In quarter 2, we focused a lot on sentence fluency, and I feel that it shows in my later essays. I tried to use repetition when necessary, and use both long and short sentences to make my writing more interesting to the reader.