In my writing, you can hear my voice and my point of view. It shows my personality, and that I am writing with a purpose. 

     Some examples that contain good examples of voice are the "Coming of Age Essay" and the "College Application Essay". I exceeded the standards in both of these essays, which shows that i understand this writing trait. I tried my best to show my personality in these essays by incorporating my thoughts, commentary, and reflections throughout my writing. From the "Coming of Age Essay" to the "College Application Essay", I improved on using ethos, logos, and pathos when necessary to enhance my writing and make the reader feel what I want them to feel.